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PostPosted: November 8th, 2008, 12:56 pm 
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The sound of the word die made Marckus's pupils shrink. He was given no time to react when his opponent came forth and began to unleash a furry of swipes with his shadow claws. Trying to avoid being hit, Marckus kepts jumping back, only to have ShadowScar chase after him. Putting up his arms in a 'X' position to protect himself, he was slashed several times causing fairly deep wounds to his arms.

There was a brief pause in the hybrid's attacks in which Marckus took the time to lower his guard and look at his arms, easily bleeding. Looking up, he saw a giant set of jaws opening up. Ready to jump back right before it closed on him, he tripped backwards, dodging the jaws anyway. Quickly scampering away, he looked back to see a hoard of needles swarm at him like hornets. Covering his head and heart, Marckus took a full blow to his entire body.

Letting down his arms from protecting himself, needles littered his body. Small light breaths was all that came from him. Moments passed when he finally moved from his motionless standing position. He slowly began to pick out the needles from his body. He had gotten most out of his arms and upper torso, then his legs gave way and fell backwards. Not giving in to the pain in his legs, he started picking out needles from his legs.

Standing up slowly as his legs shook, Marckus looked at ShadowScar, taking in deep breaths now. Raising his fists, he let his arms dangle to his sides, now showing how fatigue he really was.

((A possible post-battle scene? It should really wrap this RP up if we were to do one. If yes, then I'll edit this post. I have a great way to truly end this RP instead of whoever is knocked out first :V

Actually, more importantly, will SS be knocked out now? PM me if yes so I can possibly do that post-battle scene.))

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PostPosted: November 9th, 2008, 2:32 pm 
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(Now that you have my reply, we're set to finish =P)

The mutant's upper body hung forward like a crooked tree branch, panting and baring his fangs, loosely filmed with blood. His vision was blurry, his rage literally clouding his concentration, glowering at Marckus. He was tired; he spent too much energy too soon, and the dark hybrid's mind was sore with pulsing fury. One is able to see his breath escape from his wheezing jaws and into the cold night, as well as droplets of the dark blue fluid that steadily flees from his wounds at the same time. His patience is beyond broken; it is shattered and grounded.

So he made yet another lunge at Marckus, muttering curses of anger as he reared and hooked his claws at the young man for another deep slash at his throat. Luckily for the dark man's opponent, ShadowScar thrusted his body too far, length-wise, for his feet to reflexively recover balance before landing, and so he stopped short, instead merely raking his claws across Myut's stomach and landing hard on his stomach, and the ground welcomed his falling face with a hard thud into the dirt.

Snarling, the mutant rolled over and slowly sat back up, but he cannot continue. He clutched his aching cranium firmly and groaned in a low feral fashion, leaning down and shutting his eyes hard with teeth visibly clenched. Thump... thump-thump... thump... thump-thump went his mind, also pained from the extreme pressure its host had placed so much on. The pain was insufferable at this point, his body shaking. He couldn't take it anymore now. SS sharply raised his head and roared a loud yell into the sky, which was beautifully blanketed with darkness and stars.

"AAAAAAUGH...!! ... ..."

After the roar was done, the monster's strained muscles on his face, especially around his eyes, have loosened. His eyes went from a cold, sharp glare to a soft, tired slump, then they eased closed. Then his lower spine gave way to the sudden lost support and effort to keep his body high, and so the mutant fell back, pounding the floor with his sore, muscular upper body, and his unconscious head bobbed to the side, breathing softening to an inaudible, gasping whisper.

It was over. SS has lost.

(for those who couldn't catch what just happened... SS basically fainted/became unconscious due to massive mental stress. XD; )


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PostPosted: November 9th, 2008, 8:28 pm 
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((Sorry to intrude, but this must have been the most !@#$% epic fight RP on history.
If you guys could get someone to delete that foolish first post, this could become an example on how to RP.))

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PostPosted: November 16th, 2008, 1:27 am 
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((Finally, I can get the post in.))

Watching his opponent fall as he took a slash, Marckus took a step back to avoid the slash, only his clothing getting slashed. Watching ShadowScar go unconscious, he made his way to the hybrid's side and laid down on his belly. Ignoring the pain on his arms from the slash wounds, he curled his arms around ShadowScar's body, hugging him. Soon after, he began to sleep.
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The sun was peeking over the fields and mountains in the distance. A man with his entire face area bandaged was sitting by a fire. Beside the fire lay Marckus and ShadowScar, both unconscious. Most of the wounds were bandaged, though very amateurishly, but still got the job done. Lightly touching his bandaged face, the man let out a heavy sigh.

"I kinda wish that didn't happen, but I'm just glad no one died." Reaching into a bag, he pulled out some bread and paused. "... Aaaand, now we're out of food." Marckus abruptly shot up from his sleeping position, making the man fumble the bread, catching it before it hit the ground. Now awake, Marckus looked around, the first thing he saw was the man. Using various gestures, he questioned who the man was.

"Wha? Dang it Myut, it's me!" Joe was obviously harder to recognize then he thought with all the bandages on his face. Marckus smiled as he tightly hugged Joe. Hearing his friend let out grunts of pain, Marckus let go as Joe pointed to his chest from the branch impact.

Time passed and the duo were ready to leave the small resting spot. The sun was pretty much over the distant fields and mountains. Having bread in their mouths, Marckus stared at ShadowScar as he lay next to the extinguished fire, the hybrid's front skyward. Looking at the injuries, Marckus ripped his bit of bread in half and placed a half on ShadowScar's chest. He made an imprint in the bread and got up, signaling Joe that he was ready. Walking off, while supporting Joe, Marckus took a quick look back to see if the shadow man had awoken, but it would seen that he hadn't. Now they were out of sight, down one of the roads.

On the bread, the imprint simply read as "Bye," accompanied by a happy face.

((If you want, you can post ShadowScar's reaction to the bread on his chest, but other then that, the RP is finished :V))

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