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PostPosted: October 31st, 2019, 10:27 am 
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Here's my first fanfiction on this site! :metadance:
(Metadance is now my signature emoji XD)
It's a short little joke that I came up with while talking to
myself. I kept saying it because I found It so funny! Then I actually
wrote the thing a few months ago. Now I've translated it, made some
illustrations, and posted it here!


The action takes place in a weird alternate universe where
fictional characters and the places they live in exist in the real world
and you can sell anything and people will buy it. Even if it's PENGUIN POOP.

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Once upon a time, King DeDeDe was sitting in his garden. He was tanning
and thinking about future plans. But then one of his Waddle Dees farted so badly,
that his castle EXPLODED!
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King DeDeDe kicked him out of Dreamland forever. But there was one big problem -
he didn't have enough money to renovate the castle! But he found a safe in the
ruins of the castle, that had 1 MILLION DOLLARS inside! But Meta Knight politely
told him that it's his safe and he wants to spend it on dating his favorite anime
voice actors. DeDeDe begged him to give him the 1 million dollars, but no matter
what he promised, Meta Knight wasn't up for it. He told DeDeDe to make the
money himself. Then King DeDeDe got so mad, that they became rivals.
Out of anger, he pooped out a poop that big, that he could sell it!
He sold it on Ebay, and got 1000 dollars! But it still wasn't enough to renovate
the castle. He spent the money to buy meals, taught his Waddle Dees to poop
like penguins, and turned the ruins of the castle into a penguin poop factory! He
even pooped with them once in a while to make as much money as possible.
His plan started working - he already made 100 thousand dollars! But he spent it
all on a new factory and went bankrupt... He couldn't even buy new meals for his
Waddle Dees.
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King DeDeDe tried everything to make that money back: he pole danced, begged
on the streets and even started a GoFundMe. But his GoFundMe ended up on
r/dontfundme and nothing came out of it!
A week later he pooped out a giant poop and it was even bigger than ever! And
the poop was golden too! So he sold that poop and got 300 thousand dollars!
Thanks to the money that he made, he made an advertisement of his poop and
It was selling like crazy!
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After 5 days, he had enough money to renovate the castle! Half of his Waddle
Dees were renovating the castle, and the other were making penguin poop.
When that happened, King DeDeDe went on vacation to Japan. Meta Knight was
there too, because he was dating the voice actors of his waifus. He got their
autographs and got to know about their daily lives. They became great friends.
Almost like he had his own fanclub. Meta Knight decided to stay with them in
Japan.
Then they pointed at King DeDeDe. They were curious who he was. Meta Knight
told them the whole story.
His new friends started hating King DeDeDe. They said, that they cannot believe
that he once lived with such a loser. DeDeDe heard that. He pulled out his hammer
and tried to smack them with it. When Meta Knight noticed that, they started
fighting. The battle was cool and epic and stuff. Meta Knight won. His fangirls tried
to hug him, but he told them that he doesn't like hugs.
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King DeDeDe was VERY angry. He walked down the street and saw King Julien.
They intoduced eachother and became friends. They went to restaurants together,
discussed their royal lifes, and even played Minecraft! They love collecting ''green
butts'' XD (lilypads, I made a reference to Kaluch's King Julien plays minecraft videos)
Suddenly, someone called King DeDeDe. They said that the Waddle Dee who
destroyed his castle is coming back to Dreamland! And he has horrible plans!
DeDeDe gets VERY mad when there is someone worse than him. He wanted to go
back to Dreamland, but King Julien told him, that he will do it for him.
King Julien saw that the ''Waddle Dee'' was actually Demon Kirby! He only
pretended to be one of his Waddle Dees to destroy the castle easier!
King Julien called DeDeDe immediatelly to let him know. He came back to
Dreamland to fight Demon Kirby.
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(new shocked pikachu face right there ^ XD)
He lost that day once, and he didn't wanna lose again! He pulled out his
hammer and started fighting. The battle was not as epic as the last one,
but it was equally as cool.
Demon Kirby almost beat him, but every Waddle Dee helped DeDeDe and
Demon Kirby returned to hell!
All the Waddle Dees Started working again.
After 5 months, the castle was renovated, penguin poop was selling, and
King DeDeDe was happy.


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End of Part One, the story continues in
''King DeDeDe's Penguin Poop II - Pingu's Penguin Poop''
(already wrote it in Polish, will translate it very soon. It's amazing!)
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PostPosted: November 1st, 2019, 12:56 am 
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Favorite Kirby Game: Kirby's Dream Land 3
Location: I have a love-hate relationship with Kirby. lol
You should post this on Fanfiction and see what reactions you get. I love so bad it’s good fanfics that don’t just try to be My Immortal.

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PostPosted: November 12th, 2019, 5:38 am 
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You should post this on Fanfiction and see what reactions you get. I love so bad it’s good fanfics that don’t just try to be My Immortal.
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MY IMMORTAL?! What even is that? Is it cool
and epic and stuff like the first battle
in my fanfic? Seriously, I have no
Waluiging idea what it is...
I'm a bit too embarrased to post it on
Fanfiction - you see, I'm still recovering
from my embarrasment to everything
Kirby related.
That's why I joined this site! :metadance:
Just give me some time to recover and I'll
do it. Who knows, maybe some famous
YouTubers will read my fanfic and It will
become INFAMOUS in the WHOLE KIRBY
FANDOM?! :eek: Probably not, but time
will tell I guess.
Sorry it took me so long to respond! I didn't
feel like visiting KRR so I took a little break.

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PostPosted: November 12th, 2019, 7:38 am 
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From my understanding, i'm pretty sure My Immortal is a really crappy edgy Sonic fanfic or something like that. I know it has something to do with Sonic.

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PostPosted: November 12th, 2019, 8:46 am 
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From my understanding, i'm pretty sure My Immortal is a really crappy edgy Sonic fanfic or something like that. I know it has something to do with Sonic.
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HOLY WALUIGI! Thanks for explaining! :lol:
I get it now :smile:

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PostPosted: November 24th, 2019, 10:26 pm 
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From my understanding, i'm pretty sure My Immortal is a really crappy edgy Sonic fanfic or something like that. I know it has something to do with Sonic.
It has nothing to do with Sonic. In fact, it has barely anything to do with what it’s apparently supposed to be a fanfic of, Harry Potter.

From what I know, Harry Potter is the largest category on Fanfiction, so it makes sense that there’d be So Bad It’s Good Fics, Troll Fics, etc..

Most troll fics these days try to be like My Immortal. I don’t like that. I didn’t really care for My Immortal in the first place, and the fanfics that try to replicate it lack any creativity or surprising aspects. I want more troll fics to take risks. And that’s where Hogwarts School of Prayer and Miracles comes in.

Instead of being (or attempting to be) a goth, high school fanfic with constant swearing and spelling errors, HSoPaM is another Harry Potter fanfic, but this time it takes a different approach. It was supposedly written by a mother (appropriately known by the username of “ProudHouseWife”) who didn’t want her children to read Harry Potter books due to containing magic and witches, so she set out to make her own version. Said version revolves around Harry, now apparently an American, becoming a Christian, giving up evolution and birthdays in the process, and attending the titular HSoPaM.

This fanfic is genius. As stupid as it sounds, a mother attempting to write a “safer” version of a story for her children could very much happen in this day and age. Not only that, but it managed to make THREE groups of people angry. Harry Potter fans, parents who believe Harry Potter is fine for children to read, and those who were quick to point out that ProudHouseWife got various facts about Christianity and other religions wrong.

It also took one great cue from My Immortal that many tend to forget that made My Immortal so great in the first place; It’s difficult to tell if it’s a troll fic.

Aside from the last chapter and a few subtle details(How did this random mother find out about the Fanfiction site?), it’s near impossible to tell if it’s a troll or genuine. It’s so stuck in its own world that you can’t help but continue reading on. It’s incredible in a new(at the time, at least) and unique(again, at the time) way.

I suggest that anyone should at least take a peak at this wonderful fanfic that finally thought outside the box. I haven’t read it in a long while, but from what I can remember, unlike most So Bad It’s Good and Troll fanfics, it’s safe for all audiences to read, although I certainly wouldn’t let a child read this over the actual Harry Potter books.

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PostPosted: November 24th, 2019, 11:20 pm 
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Really? From what i saw it was Sonic related but ig not
I've never read Harry Potter so even then i wouldn't have been able to tell what it was

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PostPosted: November 25th, 2019, 8:10 am 
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Oh, so it's a Harry Potter fanfic?
I did read 3 chapters, and as an Atheist
who laughs at anything Christian and read
Harry Potter 1-4, it was pretty funny!
''Evolution is a fairytale'' XD
No offense to any Christians, of course.

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Favorite Kirby Game: Kirby & the Amazing Mirror
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I showed this part of the fic to my close friends and one of them thought it was a fetish fic (think of that smurf fanfic on bluebuddies.com)

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